It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. give example and support it
Even though there is a popular agreement that making new friends is more important since you get familiar with different personalities, I have a different opinion. I strongly believe that keeping old friends is a better choice. The basis of my opinion is educational and social perspectives.
Educationally, asking old buddies for help definitely helps people to grow smarter. When people ask an experienced friend for help, they will have a big chance to absorb a sea of knowledge, since they will discuss an array of topics. Along with this, involving a qualified friend when people want to make any professional decision allows them to use their strategic planning and thinking and enhance them as well. Furthermore, when this happens, they will be able to boost their imagination and creativity as well as their focus and attention. Indeed, if people ask a skilled old friend to assist or give his valuable ideas , they would be able to improve their mental abilities and performance. As a result, educationally, involving an expert friend in your professional or academic decision is directly related to a brilliant career.
From a social standpoint, having old friends could help people to improve their communication skills. The invention of social media such as Facebook, twitter, instagram allows people to find their old friends around the globe, which in turn enable them to live happily and in sound health. Moreover, having such technology aids people to connect with their old buddies who are always near their heart. In other words, if people have old friends, they would be able to express their inner feelings and have a good social circle. Therefore, socially, having old friends has a positive impact on people’s everyday life.
In conclusion, for all the reasons stated above, I encourage all people to consider keeping old friends in their life as they are so genuine and precious. If they do this, they will discover for themselves that having old friends in life has a countless number of educational and social benefits.
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| 2022-03-09 | nida fatima | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat making new friends is more important since you get familiar with different pe...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...end to assist or give his valuable ideas , they would be able to improve their men...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir inner feelings and have a good social circle. Therefore, socially, having old ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09821428571 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78004963249 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2791412857 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0625 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247424174091 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966343704426 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686674390669 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173166562761 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608263019772 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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