Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific examples to support your answer.
In this modern world everything is new, but the museums is a place where history of all historical events is recorded and the most valuable things of the ancient time are preserved. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that to visit museum is so boring and the waste of time, whereas, others hold different prespective. I personally, though believe that whenever people get a chance to travel new country they should visit museum. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, individuals travel the country because of there fascinating entertainment point, beauty or to meet new people. They do not have the general knowledge about that country. To exemplify, when I was young my family decided to travel and we planed to go Europe. Moreover, I was so excited to see the amazing beautiful spots. As, my parents were old they took us to the museum at first me and my brother got angry why we are going such place. Once we reach there we got a lot of knowledge about the histroy and wars and learned many more things. Therefore, this example classifies the importance of museums.
Secondly, museums are the place where people absolutely enjoy besides this they know about the cultural heritage. It really inspires people who like to do research and travelling. For instance, I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience when I was a college student, as I am major is history and I to do research. My projects topic was on the history of Haiti in order to write my paper I travelled to Haiti just after the single visit to their museum it became easy for me to write my paper. Thus, this experience taught me that always visit museum when you travel.
In light of reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that to know any country culture, heritage or history do visit the museum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69705882353 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55455864998 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570588235294 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5355889724 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9411764706 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34506268214 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105172373302 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809383564434 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203145213745 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669808868018 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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