Is university should invest its' money in improving infrastructure and physical plant or just satisfying faculty member? This question does not have any answer since either side is important. However, I personally believe that university should allot more budget to improve overall structural conditions of the university. I feel this way for two important reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, a proper environment can ensure effective education system, and without infrastructure, this will not possible. If all facilities are available in a class like materials like books, computers, good temperature, and overall appearance, students are more like to give their attention to class. On the other hand, when basic requirements such as tables, chairs, and clean rooms are not available, students will not give their attention well. My own life experience is a compelling example of this argument. I remember, when I was ten at school, I could not concentrate on the class as lots of noise comes from outside where a village market was held every day. Moreover, sometimes we did not have any seat to sit at the class, and even we had to sit under the open sky to read. In such conditions, no one is able to concentrate even through good salary was given to the teacher. On the other hand, in my university, most of the teacher get an average salary, but as a class environment is so good, all student give their concentration to the class. So, this example clearly illustrates my position.
Secondly, enough facilitated university is able to improve their rank more quickly than other universities. As this university allot more money for infrastructure and equipment facility, they can do more sophisticated research and that will help them to get more consultant works which will help them to get enough money from this investment. As a result, this university is more like to get popular and able to invest more and more in the future. For instance, a few years ago, Civil Engineering department of my university built to a large building and a research center. After two years, this department becomes one of the most eminent civil engineering department in our country by consulting most recent mega projects Hatir Jill Project, MRT project, and Jamuna Multipurpose project. As investing in improving overall college conditions helps to become a prominent university, a university should invest more money in this sector.
In conclusion, it is high time to enhance our education system and it is only possible if we spend more money to build more and more physical structures. This is because it will increase student concentration on the class and because it will help to improve university rank.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10222222222 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93494568482 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515555555556 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1629805858 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190132148695 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604466314074 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681205309054 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129515708845 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776340077228 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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