Is it okay to hit a child.
There is a widespread notion in public whether you should hit the children who disobey or not. Personally, I believe corporal Punishment for kids is an important, effective, and useful tool for teaching them how to behave. In this essay, I am going to assert my viewpoint with proper examples and arguments.
Some might believe that inflicting pain on the kids is an untoward thing to do but the saying goes "Children are a product of their parents." As long as you are striving to be a good parent you can do whatever you want in your household, only parents know what is the best for their kids and their methods should not be doubted.
To begin with, spanking the child is the best way of keeping them in line. it is perceived that children who were beaten for their bad behaviour are less likely to commit the same actions in the future. Thus, they remember it more precisely and are less likely to repeat their behaviour.
In addition, sparkling has a long long-term effect on children. In some severe cases that might be the only way of properly behaviour the child. when all the Other forms of are discipline gone kaput, parents must find the best solution in threatening their children even if that requires hitting them. To add furthermore, even if you knock out their teeth, that's ok, they are supposed to fall and eventually they will grow back.
In conclusion, I ponder that hitting children is an effective way of handling them and can have several beneficial effects.
- Some people think that you can not get a good education in a foreign country 88
- Some people think that there must be fixed punishment for all types of crimes Do you agree disagree 60
- Some people think that excess lessons help children to improve their knowledge 83
- Some people think that literate people are more difficult to control than illiterate 74
- teenager are rude ill mannered and idle 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74712643678 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6149362132 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.356038989 49.2860985944 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06452816374 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0905153734759 0.272083759551 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394467439483 0.0996497079465 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473775944594 0.0662205650399 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055486882878 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325979292759 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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