Barack Obama, such as Kennedy and Martin Luther King, was an important world leader. There are three reasons that support this opinion, he helped on the drop of racism, he has a good character and during this mandate he was in favor of the democracy.
Barack Obama was the first black president in the history of United State. This fact is very important considering that it happened in a country where people experienced a very racist period during the early nineteenth century. Despite of the fact that racism still existing in American society, having a black president contributes a lot to reduce the racism thoughts and racial segregation. In addition, it proves that black people are good enough to assume high position in the society.
Other reason for Obama to be considered an important world leader is his character. In contrast to many presidents worldwide, Obama is a very modest person. During his mandate he did not act as the most powerful man in Earth as others USA presidents were used to do. His speeches were very inspiring and rational. Also, he was in favor of peace, since he was not supporting the war sponsored by USA in the western countries.
Lastly, Obama`s politics was in favor of the democracy. There are a lot of social discrepancy in USA and assuming a politics of liberalism the doors are more open for the big companies to grow even more. It leads to the enrichment of the rich while the poor people are getting poorer. However, during the mandate of Obama the laws of the commerce were democratically controlled, balancing the social discrepancies between classes.
Thus, I believe that Barack Obama can be considered an important world leader. By being the first black president of USA, he contributed for the reduction of racism. In addition, he has a modest character what is not find very often in the presidents worldwide. Also, during his mandate he was in favor or the democracy, trying to reduce the disparities between the social classes and he did not give support to the war sponsored by USA that is happening in the western countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, lastly, so, still, thus, while, in addition, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88515406162 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71588815281 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2802501772 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7894736842 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126141391066 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474728633687 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072174030159 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795564255238 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406954631497 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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