Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Many people believe that life is simpler and more convenient now than it was when our grandparents were little. I agree with this statement. In my point of view the advent of the internet and also using the modern kitchen appliances are two main reasons, which I will discuss in further details.
Nowadays the internet facilitates communication to a great extent. Using online messengers, we are able to contact anyone all around the world at a very low cost. On the contrary, around 50 years ago in order to communicate to a person abroad you have to make an international phone call which was very high-priced. In addition, internet provides the business world with efficient means of communication. As a result, people today have the opportunity to work at home; even they can be hired by international companies without the need for travel.
In addition, advanced kitchen appliances are ubiquitous in modern era, which makes it easier to run a household. Today almost every kitchen is equipped with modern appliances such as microwaves, toaster ovens, blenders, etc. As a result, doing household chores is significantly less time-consuming than it was when our grandparents were young. Thanks to modern electronic appliances we have much more free time to enjoy.
In conclusion, I’m of the opinion that life today is way too easier in compared to the time when our grandparents were children. We have the opportunity of using the advantages of the internet and the advanced electronic kitchen appliances and consequently experience more convenient life in comparison with past generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in comparison with past generations.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20463320463 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05748602739 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6360149902 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267644008023 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868186037467 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124193895518 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177175158429 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929658519851 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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