There is no shortage of opinion on stating today the life became more easier and comfortable when compared to our grandparents time. In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement with no doubt at all. I feel this way because of two main reasons which i will explore in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the ease of accessing resources. The resources include natural ones like Air, water, food etc. and manmade resources like machines, vehicles etc. In those days the accessing these resources was a pretty difficult task. In my personal experience my grandfather used a different stories and obstacles to get sufficient amount of food and during their times. They used to walk nearly thousands of miles from the home to get drinking water. And to survive they need to go for work daily as a labor. And most often from their time they used to work as a daily wage workers. And to go for near by villages they mostly go by walk or some people go by cycle. There would be no modern transport facilities like thse days. But now everything got updated and we are having a comfortable life.
Secondly, Education system. Now we are having a sophisticated educational system and everyone are being well educated and well prospered in the society. But in those days schooling is not that easy. Education is not that encouraged in our grandfathers time. If we observe most of our grandparents don't even have a school life. I once asked my grandfather "why didn't you go to school ?". He replied that there is no school in our village to go. He needs to go to near by town on foot to go for school. And in that school to there would be no proper facilities. And my grandmother reason for not attending school was, there was no toilet facility for a girl child. And the educational system in those days was not that advanced and that comfortable as we have now. Now a days in this internet world a student can easily access all kind of materials he need and there is a proper career guidance for a student.
I strongly believe that life today became very much easier and comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. This strong belief of these two reasons of easy accessibility of resources which make a comfortable life and proper educational standards which brings proper awareness and makes life a easier one.
- People learn things better from those at their own level such as fellow students or co workers than from those at a higher level such as teachers or supervisors 70
- The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process 78
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...pinion on stating today the life became more easier and comfortable when compared to our gr...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s way because of two main reasons which i will explore in the following paragraph...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y used to work as a daily wage workers. And to go for near by villages they mostly ...
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Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...at encouraged in our grandfathers time. If we observe most of our grandparents don...
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...as no toilet facility for a girl child. And the educational system in those days wa...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ed and that comfortable as we have now. Now a days in this internet world a student can ea...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...nd that comfortable as we have now. Now a days in this internet world a student can ea...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... brings proper awareness and makes life a easier one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, kind of, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69343065693 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67986283266 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506082725061 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0363858597 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8928571429 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6785714286 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.32142857143 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212348931673 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532017056224 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124160333465 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169470563095 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14165619922 0.0645574589148 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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