There is no shortage of debate over whether the contemporary life is more comfortable than that of our ancesstors. With the rapid growth of technology to solve our day-to-day mundane tasks, I strongly believe that life today is much easier and sophisticated compared to our grandparents times. I feel this way for several reasons which I explore in following essay.
First, technology today is part of almost everyone's life. Unlike our grandparents times, we can commute from one place to another with our preferred media to commute. Today, a person can live away from his office but he can still reach his office on time with his private car or by booking a cab. After reaching office he can call his family at home to let them know that he has safely arrived at office. Our grandparents did not have all these luxuries. During their time, only few affluent people could afford to commute through cars. Normal people had to rely on bullock cards or walking by themselves to reach their desired places.
Second, rapid growth of internet, cellphone and computers has made human life much easier than one has ever imagined. A student going to college or school can easily find study materials, online tutorials and videos over the internet. He can even sit at home and take online courses and he could even graduate without having to go to college. At the same time he can do part time job such as freelance writer and earn money online. However, our ancesstors did not have any of these luxuries. My grandpa used to narrate me his childhood stories in which he had to walk 5 miles to go to his scool and there was only one teacher for entire school. They had to understand most of the things by going through textbooks. I bet no parent would let his child to go through this pain our ancesstors had faced. Application of mobiles in our daily life tremandous. One can sit at home order food, clothes groceries etc. Infact one can buy almost everything online without having to go to store. Also, one can book bus, train plain tickets, carry out bank transactions, pay bills. I can go on and on about things that one can do by using mobile. All these have saved our precious time which we can utilize on concentrating in important factors.Again, none of these things our grandparents have ever envisoned.
Third, the advent of technology has brought revolution in the field of medicine. Diseases that once killed entire village during olden days do not even exist now. In addition to this doctors today can perform complex operations like heart transplant etc. Government in many countries provide free hospital services, ambulence services 24*7. Individuals do not have to be afraid of many diseases that once dreded our forefathers. Indeed, there are disadvantages from technology like health problems, environmental pollution etc. But its advantagous outwigh disadvantages.
In conclusion, life today is much easier and comfortable compared to the life of our ancestors. This is because of improvement in way of living by growth of technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...th his private car or by booking a cab. After reaching office he can call his family ...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... to college. At the same time he can do part time job such as freelance writer and earn m...
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Line 5, column 1233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Again
...e on concentrating in important factors.Again, none of these things our grandparents ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, third, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2538.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89961389961 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69601212686 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542471042471 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 805.5 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4438003484 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.696969697 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0303030303 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12671730606 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347717909745 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064730459559 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105725677894 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794389194709 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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