There is a controversial debate that whether modern technology made our life easier or harder. Some people assert that Technology separated people and make them to feel loneliness. Others believe that the new generation of social media like Instagram, Facebook and Twitter helps people to share their idea better and sooner. In my opinion, the advantages of new life are more than its disadvantages.
First of all, Sciences serves human in this era. We cannot imagine our environment without car, cell-phone, ATM and tablet which really made our life more comfortable. For example, my grandmother explained that she had to do drudgery tasks because she did not have washer and dryer or even sweeper, so she spent most of her days for housekeeping duties without personal activities. In contrast, normally I finish housekeeping responsibilities half an hour every day and then I have a lot of extra time to study course materials, attend the university, watch my favorite movies and talk with my family during tea time. Therefore, I think there is nobody who can tell me that my life is not easier than my grandparents.
Furthermore, in the past decades people died from simple diseases which practitioner cure them now. For instance, people did not have antibiotics so infections were dangerous and life-threatening. The history shows that about 15 Millions of people were killed because of pneumonia during World War II. This estimation proves that people confronted a lot of hardships and could not survive as easily as now. Thus, we are so lucky for living in 21th Century with a lot of facilities and knowledge.
Admittedly, there are some disadvantages of using modern devices which bore us. I can remember that 20 years ago we lived more happily than now because people cared about each other and were not dependent on technology. Frequently they meet each other. The rate of depression and suicide is significantly higher nowadays which is because of weak relationships. However, I prefer to live now because if we increase our communications, we will not have any problem.
Based on aforementioned reasons discussed above, we are living in a world which was just a dream for our grandparents. These changes are all magnificent and admirable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...reatening. The history shows that about 15 Millions of people were killed because of pneumonia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11891891892 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00187912903 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613513513514 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7643292941 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1904761905 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117573899773 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357280495562 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522275274069 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062747027453 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252252678612 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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