Nowadays, People are engaged with multiplicity of color full advertisement which persuade them for having new facilities. Actually, today's life is full of instruments that may help people's life. The most important question regarding this is that if new life is more convenient that past or not. From my point of view, I deeply believe that today's life is much more comfortable regarding to the past and in what follows I will attempt to address the most discernible reasons.
First, more than a few instrument is provided to help women in household jobs. Accordingly, home appliance does severe jobs in shorter time and as easy as possible. My grandmother's story is the best epitome regarding this. She told me about the difficulties that they had in the past in preparing food for the family. It was a hard job for them to store different material since there wasn't any fridge. So they usually put their food in underground for being fresh. Albeit, the solution was temporary and foods usually destroyed within a week. But today every family have their own fridge in which let to save food for couple of months. As the example shows, new facilities make life more delightful and easier.
In addition, new technology facilitates long-winded jobs and cut the time as shortest as possible. according to this, Internet is the best and most important invention in 20th century that poses plenty of advantages. For instance, my father told me money transfer in the past and compare it to current. In the past, people waste more than a few time to stay in the bank queue to transfer money and this was not the only problem. Indeed, to transfer money from one province to another one that have only 100 kilometers distances, more than three months was necessary. But nowadays, people can do this by only pushing a toggle and done it in a fracture of second. Therefore, internet make life easier and save people's time.
The last but not the least, is that new instrument make new job opportunities for people. It contains all the money making methods that related to internet. For instance, I usually make my pocket full of money in each week and the only job that I do is to turn a toggle. Accordingly, foreign exchange is a new money making method that help people to have more income in whatever place that they are; home, university, taxi. So new job opportunity has been provided through last century.
All in all, As the aforementioned examples have illustrated, people's life has completely made convenient in new century. Not only does it make more house appliance but also it saves more time and provides new money making methods like forex.
- TPO 04_ Integrated task 80
- To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. 60
- TPO 12- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- TPO 49- Independent writingDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. 70
- Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?•Interrupt and correct the mistake right away.•Wait until the class or meeting 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...my point of view, I deeply believe that todays life is much more comfortable regarding...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun instrument seems to be countable; consider using: 'few instruments'.
Suggestion: few instruments
...cernible reasons. First, more than a few instrument is provided to help women in household ...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...to store different material since there wasnt any fridge. So they usually put their f...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...d cut the time as shortest as possible. according to this, Internet is the best and most ...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
.... In the past, people waste more than a few time to stay in the bank queue to transfer m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2202.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82894736842 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63867099909 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4137972347 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5555555556 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40740740741 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162823718047 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479382716179 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564474153354 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996671758177 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518029222025 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.