Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

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Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The significant progress of humanity in sciences and technology has improved our living standards. There is no doubt that life today is much easier and more comfortable than it was in past when our grandparents were children. The purpose of this essay is to discuss the ways by which life became more comfortable and advanced than the past.

First of all, the revolution and remarkable progress in the scientific field have contributed to more prosperous life conditions. Nowadays, medicine is able to combat the diseases which used to be incurable in the past but now they are just considered routine cases. Also, pills are available to the majority of the population for medical purposes. Life expectancy has increased considerably and the living conditions are much better.

Moreover, technological advances have facilitated our life in multiple ways. Inventions such as smart telephones and internet have improved the way of communication and interaction between people by eliminating barriers based on distance and time. Nowadays we can contact our friends or family fast and directly. The old generation had to compromise with more conservative ways of communication, such as a stable phone at the neighborhood’s market or by posting. Also, the internet provides to people a huge amount of information and knowledge that were not available in the past. In other words, education has become accessible by more people.

Additionally, the generation of our grandparents when they were children had fewer ways of entertainment. Today there is a big variety of ways that someone can spend his free time for his self-enjoyment. For instance, cinema and theatre were not easily accessible in the past either because there were only in big urban areas or because there were much expensive and people could not afford them.

To sum up, taking into account the things have been spoken above it could be concluded that the people today have the advantage of much more comfortable life than the previous generations thanks to scientific and technological progress.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, no doubt, such as, first of all, in other words, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30606060606 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06525299792 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548484848485 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3862317735 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241396546668 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752388594573 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108670375818 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139931242101 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999271898903 0.0645574589148 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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