Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that after the technology revolvtion and manufactores development the living condition changed significantly. Today, people live in very more reliable condition troward people had in the past. Contrary, to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that people in the past had been live in better mentally condition because modernlifstyle provide hug number of concern for people especially who live in the big cities. They say that today a lot of people are under mentally illness like depresion and stress, and they believe that these problem are the direct result of modern lifestyle. I, to a great extent agree with this idea that life today is more confrtable than it was in the past.
First and foremost, in the past longavity was very small and a lot of people did not recive to adult. For example, in not very far time ago, it was very natural that people dide before 70 age. However, today, longavity increased remarkable, and it is more that 80 years old. The healthy level was very low and the infection illness killed people extensively. Conversely, in the tewnty century and by hug development in science and medicen, scientist find the case of a lot of number of infections and controled epidemies and retreated thses kinds of illness.
One another significant fact that should be taken into the cosideration is that the people culture have been transforme and the number of educated people in the society increased considerablly. For instance, my grand mother says that when she was a little girle, most of family did not this allow to their children especially their female children for went to the school. Because they believed that education has not any benefit for their children. The parents prefered that their children learned their own skills and continue their parents vacation. In the past there was not any law that carring from children and some parents compeled their children for hard works like farming or working in the factories. However, today there are a lot of laws and organization that watching children life condition. In addition, the public information about impact of education increased in this shap that all of parents try to provide the best possible condition and facilities for their children education and some superstission about useful less of education disappreared completely.
Finally, yet importantly, it is true that today people have more experiance with stressful setuations but it does not mean that people now present in the lower mental healthy toward past. Beacuse, in the past a lot of mental illness did not knwen and did not treated. Today, rising public information about mental healthy ied to reasonable increase in behavioral healthy and increasing happinees between people.
On the bases of reasons that mentioed above, I am conviced that life today is very easier than it was in the past. because of developing in science and medicen, improving people knowledge about education and increase in people attention to their mentally and physical healthy.
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 76
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do 76
- TPO 44 73
- One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them take a part time job 76
- TPO 45: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and ex 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 576, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...esion and stress, and they believe that these problem are the direct result of modern lifesty...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'treat'
Suggestion: treat
...ental illness did not knwen and did not treated. Today, rising public information about...
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Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...is very easier than it was in the past. because of developing in science and medicen, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, it is true, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2577.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13346613546 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6774101484 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48406374502 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 807.3 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3410754341 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.136363636 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185261101729 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664145983963 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737373503663 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106781590895 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342629939845 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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