living beside our extended family was more important in the past than it is today? agree or disagree
Since the beginning of the last century, our society has become very mobile. Some people hold the view that living besides our relatives is not important, however there is a solid body of opinion that casts doubts on these beliefs. From a personal perspective, I believe that living nearby our extended family is important nowadays than ever before given that our family can provide us with support, sense of security, and traditions. Below I will strive my supporting points in more details.
Firstly, the cost of living has become very high which makes both parents work to earn more money to support their family. Provided that they live besides their relatives, they can provide them with help and support. The noteworthy refreshing intelligible statistics, revealed by a recent survey conducted by Oxford university found that, people who live beside their extended family are happier and more productive than those who live away from their relatives. Not only because family can provide support and encouragement, but also assist with childcare giving parents much-needed break. Consequently, living beside family is a blessing.
Next, coupled with supportive, sense of security is another reason for the importance of extended family. Provided that there is any sort of emergency, our nearby relatives can help. A vivid example can be given to shed a light on what was elaborated is the whole family in Egypt live in the same house with a layout gives each member of the family the privacy which build strong bonds throughout all generations. In addition to that, our family always loves us whatever who or what we achieved. Therefore, our family can give us the sense of real love.
Although the previous reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only one available. In fact, there is another subtle point must be born in mind. Extended family is very important to pass on values and tradition throughout all generations. For example, adults in California gain understanding of their traditions and have opportunity to lean different values when they live with their multiple generations of their family. As a result, living beside our relatives is very important to cultivate and carry on values and traditions.
Taking everything into a consideration, without a doubt extended family is very important today then it was in the past underestimating the significance of the family in our life is not logical. It is suggested that people compromise to ensure that they achieve work/family life balance, placing more importance on family relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in fact, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14893617021 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77030835183 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3730284985 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386621650544 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114303565076 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860202184212 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227249565815 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670633789249 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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