Living in a city or in a village is better. Why ? Use specific reasons and examples.
From time immemorial, people always are in a search of places to live in. Some people prefer to live in an urban environment whereas others prefer suburbs. As far as I'm concerned, I love to live in a city rather than a village because of three main rationales which I can elaborate upon hereunder.
To begin with, the city dwellers have advantages of experiencing modern facilities and accessibilities to the infrastructures which sometimes is fascinating even for villagers. On top of that, the advent of the Internet in 1990, ameliorates the utilization of opportunities even in communication. High-quality hospital services are primarily available in a city than rural people. Therefore, experienced doctors and the medical system is available there. Moreover, urban people enjoy diverse modes of transportation like railways, airways, and metros.
Next, more career options and job varieties available in cities that enable people to earn more income. In contrast, in a village usually, people follow the job of their ancestors. Even if children had several abilities and talents, parents insist them do the same jobs like farming or animal husbandry. Furthermore, the level of education for the parents and even for their children is limited as there are fewer options for education. As a result, personal talents are destroyed and they cannot find career options. They need to survive with their modest income and available opportunities.
Finally, nowadays people seem to be capricious; in other words, they are getting bored by the repetitiveness of works and they cannot find the satisfaction of their needs. Human beings show a tendency to change their hobbies and involve in recreational activities. A city provides a wider arena of these options such as museums, theater, playgrounds, golf clubs, etc...When they engage in this, they can not only deepen family roots but also make life qualitative and productive.
However, living in a village also has its own benefits such as enjoying the green blanket of nature, less traffic, and less pollution. But the benefits of inhabiting the city outweigh the advantages of facilities in a village.
All in all, by taking all the points into account, I vehemently assure that Urban life is much better than rural life. That is due to the good facilities in transportation, communication, medical care, job opportunities, and sites of recreation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, in contrast, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29765013055 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07645156976 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590078328982 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7004544142 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.619047619 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2380952381 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90476190476 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119779383238 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321594583501 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367377855121 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063428897573 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454494743926 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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