It is beneficial for people to spend some time living in a country where they must speak a foreign language. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The trend of travelling to foreign nation has been elevating over the past few decades. In the given scenario, it is stated that some people think it is crucial to stay in a non native country where there is a compulsion to speak their native language wheareas other people opine it does not benefit people in any aspect so there is no need to reside there. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that although living in non native country might be beneficial to some extent however this is not suitable in long run. I feel this ways for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, living in a foreign is very challenging as it creates difficulty to communicate in first place. To be more precise, although we learn the dialect of certain nation then that might not be of any use once we return to our home land. To exemplify, if a Nepalese residing in Japan become fluent in japanese language thEn it will be of great help for him either in office, school and son on. However, what are usuage of this language once he return to home land? Needless to say, it will be of no use as we Nepalese people do need japanese language in any way. Thus, learning distinct language seems to be not helpful.
Secondly, once we initiate living in foreign land then after certain period we begin to adopt foreign culture along with language. Precisely, there is a high probability of forgetting home language and culture. For instance, if a person stay abroad for a long time, then he will be accustomed to the local environment and as a result he will gradually forget about the local language culture and tradition of his home land. If a parents are not known about the native language then what else do we expect from their offspring? Indeed, they will become a full foreigner and this will adversly have negative influence to our home culture.
The above mentioned statement sounds reasonable however short term stay in foreign land might be of great help. For example, learning new language and culture is fascinating. We can be acknowledge about the outside world like their living style, the way of perceiving things and so on. This might aid us in our own personal life. Therefore, the positive side of residing abroad should not be overlooked nevertheless we should stick in our own ground.
All thing despite the fact that learning exotic language is welcoming , this will not grant benefit in long run. Hence, people should be mindful about their home culture and tradition no matter where they live and always should be grateful for their roots.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71460176991 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48803989695 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486725663717 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7013602089 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8636363636 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19760188956 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590404581239 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391734229186 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119405660848 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494148707506 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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