Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
The place, where the human spends his first years, plays a major role in his future and it contributes significantly in his success. Some people believe that the native region helps individual to become successful person, while others argue that the success of the person depends mainly on the personality of human and not on his origin. This essay will discuss how the native regions affect on significantly on human success and on his accomplishments.
The place of origin has a significant impact on human success because it makes human to become more motivate and more passion. Living in difficult regions teaches human to become more tough and more undependable. Recent research, which was conducted in the Cambridge university, has shown that 90% of American people have been affected positively by their original regions, and they express more motivation and more creativity. Therefore, it seems clear that the place of origin is very crucial in the success of the individual.
On the other hand, some people think that there is no relation between the native regions and the success of person. They support their view through providing a lot of examples of people who traveled to another country, where they adapt easily without any difficulties. But these people are unaware of the fact that the number of these people is very small and should not express this issue as a general rule, it is just a unique case. Thus, the place, where individual grew up, is very important and affects on person accomplishments.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how the environment at which the human lives his childhood affects on human future life. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that human future success depends on his native region.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05517241379 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69610191151 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520689655172 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9513427316 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263580329192 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111590170996 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976178167153 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168636586309 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557593497263 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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