Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
The place, where the human spends his first years, plays a major role in his future and it contributes significantly in his success. Some people believe that the native region helps individual to become successful person, while others argue that the success of the person depends mainly on the personality of human and not on his origin. This essay will discuss how the native regions affect on significantly on human success and on his accomplishments.
The place of origin has a significant impact on human success because it makes human to become more motivate and more passion. Living in difficult regions teaches human to become more tough and more undependable. Recent research, which was conducted in the Cambridge university, has shown that 90% of American people have been affected positively by their original regions, and they express more motivation and more creativity. Therefore, it seems clear that the place of origin is very crucial in the success of the individual.
On the other hand, some people think that there is no relation between the native regions and the success of person. They support their view through providing a lot of examples of people who traveled to another country, where they adapt easily without any difficulties. But these people are unaware of the fact that the number of these people is very small and should not express this issue as a general rule, it is just a unique case. Thus, the place, where individual grew up, is very important and affects on person accomplishments.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how the environment at which the human lives his childhood affects on human future life. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that human future success depends on his native region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05517241379 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69610191151 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520689655172 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9513427316 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263580329192 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111590170996 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976178167153 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168636586309 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557593497263 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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