Many people visit museums when they travel to new places Why do you think people visit museums Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

All over the world every country has it's own historical place to visit which is named as museum. It is important to keep the memories alive of the people who sacrifice their lives. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that museum is not a place to visit it is a waste of time, whereas, some have opposite perspective. I personally, though, believe that whenever you visit a new country must go to the museum it is really a knowledgeable and interesting place. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, the museum is the remanant of all the wars and things that were left after the time of partition. It is necessary because the young generation can learn a lot about their country just in single visit. To exemplify, when I was in school our teachers arranged a trip to museum for all students which is free of cost. My history teachers told a lot about it but I never learnt it, as history seems boring to me, but when I visit it with my friends it was so fascinating and many things to learn. Thus, this example elucidates that individuals who love history or not must visit the monuments.
Secondly, there are thousands of people who do not like to visit museum, but they thought it is a place where a good time can be spent with friends and family. It changes the environment otherwise only get togethers happen on restaurants or home. For instance, few years back when I visited united states my aunt took me to museum although I do not like it, but with the friends and cousins the experience was amazing. In addition, whole time we kept talking about the statues and stuff that was preserved there and I got the information about the united states. Therefore, this experience taught me that people must visit museum when they travel to new place.
To wrap up, I my opinion museum are the best place to visit with friends and family and for young generation to learn.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53781512605 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49209690098 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512605042017 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5207644855 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369418574416 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120773292949 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958557479272 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221071426947 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796365415882 0.0645574589148 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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