Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In this modern world, there are a lot of inventions by human and technology is keep growing, besides it amazing outcomes for humanity it is affecting our global system. Some people may agree that humans are not making earth worst place to live but I absolutely disagree. In my view, as time is passing there are numerous changes have been seen on the land and 90 percent is not a good change. In the, following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, there are thousands of factory who are making different products for our use. It is necessary for all companies to discard their waste product properly but unfortunately they do not which leads to the ocean pollution. Moreover, this population is not limited to the water but it ultimately comes to human in form of food and effects the health. For instance, I do remember when I was a child my parents always took me to the beach and it is very fascinating with blue water even sometimes we dive. Now the water is so dirty of black color even we can not think to go on beach. This instance elucidates that world is getting change with time due to human activities.
Secondly, with the scientific technology every country is making their own disastrous weapon. These are the most lethal weapon on earth, even in one shoot it can destroy a whole city. For example, now in afghanistan people are so scared because this government have authority to use all such weapons on the people who do not follow their rules although it is wrong or right. Moreover, the locals of Afghanistan want escape so they hung themselves on plane just for a better place to live. There are consequences of every action public have to face this. Thus, this example illustrates that the earth is getting worse to live.
To wrap up, no doubt human activities are in favour of humanism but with time it is getting opposite. People survive not matter what but it is frustating sometimes. The life of people of country like Afghanistan, Syria, Kashmir is so challenging because of human activities. We all need to make world a better place for living. It is our duty to let all people live in peace all over the globe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'earth the worst'.
Suggestion: earth the worst
...le may agree that humans are not making earth worst place to live but I absolutely disagree...
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Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...and 90 percent is not a good change. In the, following essay, I intend to put forth ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, even so, for example, for instance, no doubt, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5919395466 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52404259238 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549118387909 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8214265932 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8095238095 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229707063859 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064620126225 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603619748804 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137880197581 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356963911956 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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