Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
People have always been making various opportunities for handling their life in a smart way and travel is one kind of these opportunities. By visiting different places and visit museums we can learn more about a culture of that places. The museum can capture our attention to the arts and other information about that region. For instance, why the people in that area used for communication or wearing.
The second reason that is coming to my mind is museum not only can show us the history of that place but also, help the traveler to have a deeper views of the changes that happened through years before. For example, I travel to France last year and by visiting Louvre Museum, I understand better the history of France and their revolution in 18 centuries.
Another aspect that should be addressed in this explanation is when people visiting another country and or city they like to gain more knowledge and enjoy their time. Museums are the best place for enjoying our time and learn about various features of that place. Moreover, the museum is the place that tourists can become more familiar with the place that they are visiting in a short time.
To sum up, I believe, tourist and traveler from all around the world would learn about culture, history, art and enjoy their time in an efficient way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a smart way" with adverb for "smart"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s opportunities for handling their life in a smart way and travel is one kind of these opportu...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ture, history, art and enjoy their time in an efficient way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74561403509 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41240829009 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574561403509 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8676643061 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250716265981 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102915135314 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526584579642 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139981998107 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768723580746 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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