Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
museum is the collection of artifacts and other objects like cultural, scientific and historical importance. people study the heritage of a place through the artifacts which are collected and stored with high importance.many people visit the museum to study the place how rich it was or how did the city evolve from one condition to another. Most of the metropolitan cities have a museum.
studying history not only helps us to understand the past but also guides with the future to think and learn from it. For example as a student i was very bored of studying my history books. it was very difficult for me to remember the dates and the works one day my history teacher took us all to a museum. From that day my view on history changed. She explained us the story by showing each and every artifact that was important. that also made us understand that studying visually helps us in rendering the things much better than just listening to it.
As we all know that museums stores the rich heritage of history. The archaeologist dig deep into the ground to get the artifacts of the ancient time. This helps us in getting to know roots like from the evolution of the man that is a human has grown from an ape and their process of learning from stone age to modern civilization. we we not only got the evolution of humans but also different mammals or animals like dinosaurs and megaladons. I always used to visit museum to look at these animals they were my favorite artifacts of all time.
many people visit the museums to get inspired from the past. There are many designers who visit the museum and get inspired by the paintings and art that are done on buildings, pots they make a new expo based on them. According to me museums helps us defining the current from the past as it inspires us to become better. That's why many people visit the museum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55389221557 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48050413933 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511976047904 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6755763026 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232337781283 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925257544507 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12101200548 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156841505972 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112443835494 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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