Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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...aces to take an experience for tourist. they can contemplate unique and historical o...
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...s. For instance, millions of individuals choose The Louvre museum during the exhi...
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...roaden their horizons through a colossal range of precious pictures, historical e...
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...d achievements those countries created. Thirdly, these days, young generations a...
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...sense of patriotism for their countries, which can be seen as a positive educatio...
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..., such as providing historical learning, bring people to the magnanimous events i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, for instance, i feel, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38834951456 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00158628373 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637540453074 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0423004778 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 5.45110844103 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14234288217 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440078257418 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512525432254 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907141566717 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484373158816 0.0645574589148 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.01818996416 128% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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