Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
When it comes to the issue the important quality of a roommate, it is quite normal that people may have different opinions about it. According to my experience and observation, a roommate must be helpful, trustworthy, and does not be nosy. Following, I try to explain my reasons clearly.
The first and important feature is that a roommate does not be nosy. I think that nothing is hateful than having pry person around you, because you never feel privacy. I think that here is not a better example than myself when I was in the university. At that time, I as a student who did not receive any financial aid from family or university had to live in a small apartment with another my classmate. He liked to know everything about my life, even though it was a private. In the beginning, I tolerate his behavior, while since I was aware that he opened my personal letters, which were my mother. I preferred to leave thee and back on campus. Since, if you want to have a private life, do not allow a nosy person live with you.
A further point we must consider is that you can be more success in the university, if you have a smart roommate. I think that a small instance can give some light on this issue. After I backed on the dormitory, I had to take a room with another student, who was a best in their major. He assisted me to acquire many achievements in my major. Moreover, I learn of him for being a successful person in academic education; I should have discipline; manage my time and source, and more focus on my aims. Eventually, I not only graduate from my university with best grades but also apply for an outstanding university in the United States. I admit that my roommate had a crucial role in my successes.
Apart from points I made above, another quality that a roommate should have a sense of humor. As we all know, students usually left home for first time and have not been enough experience about unknown environment, which affect their spirit negatively. Hence, having a roommate, who is fun, can help us to adapt quickly with new life. In addition, he makes an intimacy atmosphere in a room and fills you with fresh energy to continue your education.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that a good roommate must be helpful, reliable, and does not be spying. Last but not least, I hope that all students pay more attention to select their roommates, because it would be an integral part of their lives when they are studying in the university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ke a room with another student, who was a best in their major. He assisted me to ...
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Line 9, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en they are studying in the university.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'i think', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.180555555556 0.229887763892 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.156746031746 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.093253968254 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047619047619 0.046263068375 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.115079365079 0.0685040099705 168% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.125 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.015873015873 0.0351676179071 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.6176469765 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238095238095 0.0309702414327 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0873015873016 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0198412698413 0.0209618222197 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015873015873 0.0139019557991 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2497.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 448.0 408.028673835 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57366071429 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294642857143 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220982142857 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158482142857 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0959821428571 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6176469765 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533482142857 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 62.3161747444 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6666666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9054928591 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.041666667 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 40.7648809524 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.00621118012 1.45489161554 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258367344855 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0751313013587 0.103427244359 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0623021370677 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.427856251105 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114776952405 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842847354181 0.114077575197 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451767342007 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288132606955 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0931244990092 0.067059652881 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170090299272 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380434381847 0.0618886996521 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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