Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.
When it comes to the issue the importance of experience new things, some people believe that it is humans’ instinct to try new things, and they could stay same situation. However, others maintain the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
The first and most important reason is that making experience is the main cause of human progresses. As we all know, experience is the significant way for acquiring knowledge, so that plenty of our sciences base on it. It is quite normal gaining new experience, whether is good or bad, always has increased your knowledge and brings developments. I think that a small example can give some light on this topic. Imagine Christophe Coulomb feared of cruises and stayed at his country. Hence, he never could discover an unknown continent, which is called America. The scenario is the same for other human explorations. Overall, the biggest advantage of new experience lies in the fact that enhances humans' knowledge, and develops their talents.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. I think that excitement in making experience new thing is more than that of in staying stable. We could never avoid of new things in order to fear of unknown. This living does not qualify for us, because it will destroy our enthusiasm and bring depression. I think that there in no better example than myself when I was studying in the university. At that time, I suffered of shyness, which made me to feel isolated. I had spent most time at home, and played computer games. This condition cause I never enjoyed of anything, while my peer had exciting-rich life. Now, I think that I lost many of my younger years without any pleasure. The life is more beautiful than we could imagine, but for appreciating it you need to try new things.
Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that experience new things obviously causes human could gain more progress, and brings more excitements. Of course, as an English proverb goes “coin has two sides,” those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that in the most cases, these experiences could be uncomfortable. Nonetheless, I think that its benefits outweigh dangers. Last but not least, let us hope people detect that they could not learn swimming by staying at beach.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'i think', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208955223881 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.16631130064 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10447761194 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405117270789 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0831556503198 0.0685040099705 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117270788913 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0277185501066 0.0351676179071 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70670699107 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0106609808102 0.0309702414327 34% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0810234541578 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234541577825 0.0209618222197 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106609808102 0.0139019557991 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2408.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 408.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90196078431 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252450980392 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18137254902 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115196078431 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70670699107 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.524397521467 112% => OK
Word variations: 71.0624138648 59.2087087015 120% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6923076923 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1880800921 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6153846154 120.699889404 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 40.9374057315 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.22058823529 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176757841992 0.300154397459 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0621517723622 0.103427244359 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0625779719848 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.389500792608 0.497263757937 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135575272892 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532243003622 0.114077575197 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503098057329 0.0781384742642 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.339671596096 0.336927656856 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0367760536757 0.067059652881 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129766025685 0.210909579961 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430933304146 0.0618886996521 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.