many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate?
The question is that many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? In first glance, it may be difficult for us to define the features of a roommate, however everyone with regard to his behavior and characteristics and also needs can express different qualities for this person. My requests from a perfect roommate are listed below:
To begin with, it is axiomatic that dormitory life plays a crucial role in students ' life. Believe or not, it is one of the happiest periods in people's living. Since your roommate’s behavior can affect directly on your personality; hence it is essential that he be diligent in any major. When your roommate has a great passion toward the study, spontaneously you will be inclined to study carefully, even more this circumstance can create a competition feeling in the room. This issue is similar to a person who does not have any incentive for doing exercise as long as he goes to the GYM and meets a lot of people who do exercise. It goes without saying that such a condition will motivate him to practice. In fact a good friend has to able to stimulate his roommate to do appropriate things.
The second feature lies in the fact of having responsibility feeling. As we all know, there some common things for doing in a dormitory. For instance bringing out trashes, cleaning room, being quite especially when roommates are studying and list goes on. If a person is disordered or apathetic, his roommates can confront with a lot of troubles. Subsequently being neat and ordered is another his characteristics.
Having discussed this issue from this point of view; I am going to empower it by following discussion. Nobody could overlook this fact that a social person can improve a friendly relationship. For example, when you are upset due to being far from your family or getting low grade, he has to have an ability to make you happy. A selfish or solitary person will establish a horrible memory from dormitory life for us.
By taking all above mentioned, this conclusion could be drawn that a man with having a high level of communication, responsibility, being joyful is the best choice for being roommate.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 385 350
No. of Characters: 1812 1500
No. of Different Words: 214 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.43 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.706 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.76 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.754 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.264 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.326 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate?...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry life plays a crucial role in students life. Believe or not, it is one of the h...
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Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
...es can confront with a lot of troubles. Subsequently being neat and ordered is another his c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84675324675 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89285123966 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9229723493 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289438759222 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103611951917 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173892172314 0.0737576698707 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173795086203 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183650068472 0.0645574589148 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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