Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
University students have to apply for universities that are far away from home. Thus, they should spend most of their off-college time with their roommates. Choosing an appropriate roommate is a crucial issue that should be considered deeply. In my idea, a suitable roommate should be organized and similar to me in personality traits and cultural aspects.
First of all, as I am a neat and very organized person, my roommate should be neat and organized too. For example, I have a daily plan that has detailed description on my duties. My roommate should have such plan. I should what he will do in specific time of the day. Lacking organization make me frustrate. I don't count on acquaintances in my life, so I expect my roommate should be organized too. In addition, I am very neat. I should know all of my stuff's place. Being neat is necessary to my roommate too. Because I can't help him to find her stuff all time in this complex and busy era. Usually, Being neat and organized are complementary. Not being neat means not being organized.
Next, we should have some similarities in personality traits. For example, I am an introvert and agreeable person with higher rate of conscientious. I can't stand chatty people which always talk about themselves. My roommate should be more agreeable and not to be rigid in facing with day life difficulties. He should be responsible for our room's duties; washing dishes, cleaning room and take care of our stuff. In addition, we should have similar hobbies for our leisure time. For example, I love soccer and really eager to watch it along with my friends especially roommate. It would be better if he and me share our common interest with each other without showing any disinteresting.
Finally, we should culturally similar together. This is very important. For example, I am Muslim. I have some restriction and obligations in my religion as my roommate has them; for instance, fasting in Ramadan and doing pray every day. I expect my roommate to respect my believes. This can prevent any further confliction and struggles. Furthermore, Being culturally similar can help us to make our life easier. For example, my friend has a roommate from China. He should cook every day for herself because Chinese food are not compatible with Iranian diet. They eat food that are weird and disgusting for us; like snakes, frogs or other creature. But we our main meal is consist of rice, bread and meat as well as vegetables. Thus, cultural similarity is very important in choosing a roommate.
In conclusion, I prefer a roommate that is organized, neat and have similarities in culture and personality. If a person can pass all of my criteria for a suitable roommate, I'll ask him to live with me immediately. I want to have good memories from my roommate and college period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
...cking organization make me frustrate. I dont count on acquaintances in my life, so I...
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...necessary to my roommate too. Because I cant help him to find her stuff all time in ...
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Suggestion: help him find
...sary to my roommate too. Because I cant help him to find her stuff all time in this complex and ...
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...eing neat means not being organized. Next, we should have some similarities i...
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...on with higher rate of conscientious. I cant stand chatty people which always talk a...
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... without showing any disinteresting. Finally, we should culturally similar to...
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...day. I expect my roommate to respect my believes. This can prevent any further conflicti...
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Suggestion: consisted
...other creature. But we our main meal is consist of rice, bread and meat as well as vege...
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...of my criteria for a suitable roommate, Ill ask him to live with me immediately. I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, really, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2348.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86128364389 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8422482107 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494824016563 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 27.0 9.59856630824 281% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 39.0 20.6003584229 189% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 27.6910493541 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.2051282051 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3846153846 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128832343947 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395926191477 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390370316621 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09566374152 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306959599219 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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