In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are not limited to the examples listed in the question.
Most of the people in the world are reading books and articles which describe the successful person's characteristics. They heard a lot of stories that successful people are intelligent, genious, hardworking, philosopher, etc. Some of us believe that intelligence is sufficient to be successful and when see smart people who failed in their life, we really shock! In my perspective, in spite of legendary charachteristics of successful people, one trait is very bold and important in their prosperity; it is perseverance. I will give some explanations to support why I think that perseverance is the most important trait of successfulness.
First of all, perseverance is highly correlated with motivation. People, whose have higher rate of perseverance an hardworking, are more motivated to do their tasks in work place or in family. Many studies indicated that highly motivated people are more succeed in their personal and work life. So, it is very important for people to motivate themselves when doing their job or in family to keep their perseverance in higher rate.
Second of all, persevere people are passionate about their life. They enjoy their life and eager to explore new aspects of their life. Disregarding to definition of sucessfulness in life, which some emphasize on material aspects of life and some focus on spiritual, if a person have keen to do a thing, he/she will be succeed in it undoubtedly. For example, as Hamid Mohammadi, the founder of Digikala in Iran, quoted:" I was hard work and persevere because I was passionate and interested to my job". So, an eager to do something is equal to perseverance; however; others think that perseverance is equal to hardworking and enduring a lot of pressures. But pressure is like a sense of eagerness to successful people. They enjoy it!.
Third and last but not least, the most important aspect of perseverance that may overlap with both above factors is in that persevere people never give up and quit. Their passionate and motivation that make them persevere, create a strong sense of self-confidence and hope that make them to believe that they will be finally successful. Even in their personal life, their hardworking and patience, which are other aspects of perseverance, able them to resist against life's difficulties. To illustrate, we all read and heard stories about scientists and inventors like Thomas Edison, Gregor Mandal, Enrico Fermi, etc. that failed in many times but started from the first point to correct their mistakes or find the problem. If They did not persevere, we have not electricity and many of other devices.
To sum up, Although intelligence and other factors are very important to be successful in life, history of succeeded people have proved that perseverance is the key of prosperity and successfulness. Persevere people are more motivated and passionate to do jobs and never abandon it. They keep trying until succeed. As Einstein said:" Intelligence is one percent effective in successfulness and perseverance is ninety nine percent".
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2580.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23326572008 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17352117753 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466531440162 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 827.1 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3784607412 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.72 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124351048145 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386630265975 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308110041015 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080583659013 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218881961835 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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