More and more employers are offering their employees the option to telecommute, that is, to carry out their work from home via the Internet as opposed to working in the office. Why do you think employers have started to provide this option? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern era, technology is developing perfectly. With this development, employees are together using technology to help them easier in their works. But, the average of technologies may need the internet or people usually called WiFi. Sometimes, the internet in the office not as faster as the internet at their home. they might think that carry out their works to their home is better than in the office because it can help them to be more efficient. The faster internet is the most important thing in reducing the time of works.
Initially, the main reason for providing the option of telecommuting is efficiency when doing their works. The slow internet at the office approximately is caused by any employees use it at the same time. so that the internet is going slowly. that reason can cause the employees to become lazy workers because they are doing nothing and can't doing anything. they can not do their works properly.
The other reason is the situation in the office. some employees may be stressed because of various conditions. they can be stressed by their boss. some office which has many workers could make the employees stressed because of the crowded situations. The crowded situations could make the employees hard to find great ideas for their works. they could make the works become worst. ideas are very important in the quality of works. so that they might think work from home makes them serene and helps them find out the great ideas for their works.
In conclusion, efficiency and peace situations are the most important thing for the employees when they are doing their works. they can start the works with better mood and fresh thoughts so that they can produce more greatest ideas. I think the offering of the option is the best way for their goodness to help them produce the quality of the works.
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- More and more employers are offering their employees the option to telecommute that is to carry out their work from home via the Internet as opposed to working in the office Why do you think employers have started to provide this option Use specific reaso 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, as for, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3987903225 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425396825397 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.799696834 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2857142857 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305592371689 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094185548749 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704903757229 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204489229466 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504715934369 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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