The quality of the products that we buy is very important. People like to spend their mony on what they think is worth it. Some people think advertisements make a great impact on peoples view on a product; others disagree. In my view, advertizement make products seem much better than they really are for two important reasons.
First, in advertisements the capibility and quality of the products are ususlly exagurated. By saying and claiming things that are not ususlly right they persuaid their audiance to buy their products. For example, I remmeber when I was about 7 years old, when ever I watched television and cartoon, there was this advertisement that showd a bunch of kids playing with a toy airplain. It showed that whenever they pushed the airplain, it would fly around a park for a minute. As a result, I got very intested in that and cried for my parents to buy one of those to me. Eventhough they would tell me it is a lie but I was convinced that it would acctually work. So they bought me that toy, and as you can expect it did not work that way and it was just a waste of money. So this experience thought me that advertisement make products seem much better than they really are by exagurating their capibilites.
Second, they don't tell people their products' disadvantages. They advertisements only talk about advantages and benefits of using their products which sometimes results in misleading the costumers. For example, about 4 years ago, when I was a student in University of Tehran, I needed to buy a new laptop with better performance and capacity. On the other hand, I did not have alot of money. So as always, I searched the internet, to find a powerfull laptop with reasonable price. After a few minutes of searching and exploring, an advertizement cought my eye. A powerfull and beautiful laptop was shown and under that, in big latters it was writen that, this computer is the most powerfull one in the world. And the price was so good, so as you can guess, I ordered one of them. But after holding it in my hand I felt the poor quality the plastic they had used for the frame. And also, when the screen was turned on, the quality of it was so poor that I had to use an external monitor to see it clearly. So as you can see, the advertisement told me nothing about the poor quallity of other feutures of that laptop, so in a way, they made their products look better than it really was.
In sum, advertisements often make their products better than what they really are. Not only they exagurate about their capiblities, but they also neglect to talk about the disadvantages of their products. So, I believe we should be more carefull about the products we buy and not trust the advertisemenst too much.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'as a result', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.18315018315 0.229887763892 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.168498168498 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0512820512821 0.0866891130778 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0695970695971 0.046263068375 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.119047619048 0.0685040099705 174% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.130036630037 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.029304029304 0.0351676179071 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7147965699 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0164835164835 0.0309702414327 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0860805860806 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0128205128205 0.0209618222197 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018315018315 0.0139019557991 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2741.0 2387.08602151 115% => OK
No of words: 491.0 408.028673835 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58248472505 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.281059063136 0.338922669872 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205702647658 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148676171079 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.091649694501 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7147965699 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466395112016 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.3789330855 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8846153846 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1437311772 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.423076923 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8846153846 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.644075263715 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 39.4548801504 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 0.958974358974 1.45489161554 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244792961615 0.300154397459 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121026383987 0.103427244359 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0808202325649 0.0752933317313 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.440440876601 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119388111996 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100921586781 0.114077575197 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146747730066 0.0781384742642 188% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.393217579259 0.336927656856 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108163070407 0.067059652881 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226706304392 0.210909579961 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917684999017 0.0618886996521 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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