news which propagate by media are accurate
There is no doubt that nowadays media including television, radio, and internet have a crucial role in broadcasting news all over the world. A question which arises here is whether or not news propagating by media are accurate. Some people may hold the idea that these news are completely true, while I am of the opinion that in the most of cases, this news are distorted. There are numerous grounds, two of which I will explore in what follows.
The first substantiate point bear in mind is that public media propagates news in the way that they want. It is no secret that in the contemporary world competition between different media networks is so close. As a consequence, most of them try to make news more attractive for their audiences. In this way,they can attrack more followers. For instance, these days lots of websites every day distribute lots of wrong but attractive news which lead to having hundereds followers.
The second point which deserves some words here is that some news are not allowed to distribute accuratly due to the fact that some news are not beneficial for some organizations like some powerfull companies or even the government. Thus, they force public news distributing to present news based on their desire. Take my country as an example of this.Several years ago, tempretature in most of cities in my country incredibly increased. It was a harsh weather condition nobody was able to go to his work or any where else. On the other hand, government could not suspend offices or schools. Therefore, the government authorities forced media to represent lower temperature and pretend that everything is fine, because only in this way they could convince people to go to their work. This example demonstrates that news presenting by media are not always accurate.
on the whole, based on the points mentioned above, we can safely reach the conclusion that media are not always honest with people because in this way they can not only attract more followers, but also have the satisfaction of important organization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, no doubt, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97093023256 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76848597657 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549418604651 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3405979359 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.588235294 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317333738416 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107112010454 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107206004276 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201170191447 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113514736823 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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