Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way
people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Preparing foods is very challenging at the primitive ages. But due to advancement of science, food processing has changed to a position that if I want a completed fast food, it will automatically come to my mouth at a glance. So it is undoubtedly said that food processing has improved a lot to make life easier.
Firstly, look at the primitive ages where people only burnt animals and ate food. But at now what a change of food processing is really astonishing. Those people almost ate food without full burning, even if they did not know the use of spices. For example, I have noticed my mother cooking. It is really far easier and no problem of cooking. For making rice she uses pressure cooker, for spices she uses blender machine, for making cakes she uses microoven etc
Secondly, there is lack of availability of recipe books and videos in the past or in an ancient times. But as the internet is readily available to any zone of a country, it brings out major change in people’s life. Moreover, nowadays, the internet is cheap and easily accessible to housewives or chefs. Nowadays, women directly prefer to watch online recipe videos while preparing of food. It not only suggest step wise procedure to prepare meal but also plays an important role to serve tasty and delicious food.
Thirdly, now scientists have made a lot of invention about the uses of cooking food.Now we know about the amount of vitamin and carbohydrate in the fruits. So we are eager to take those foods but ancient people were not known to this toipic . As a result they took different food but6 they did not get full nutrients.
4thly,ready made food is available at now. For example when I feel appetite I go to the canteen and eat a burger,pasta etc. So it is quite easier for ourselves and food sellers. It reduces our time for food processing. It saves time a lot. As a result we now replaced those times in our other works as playing games,watching tv shows. Moreover this off topic helps us to enjoy passing time in the library etc.It saves the forests and logs to create fire in the oven.
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| 2019-02-27 | MD. TOUKIR HASAN | 70 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62803234501 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62129030273 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5629770442 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.652173913 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1304347826 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73913043478 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183883744578 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527648755133 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324298323628 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10147014643 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243310353282 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.