Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Subsequently, people are tend to consume some junk food, which is the easiest food to prepare. For example, the hamburgers, pizzas and so on. Although, many people thinks that the easiness of food has improved the way people live, in my opinion it has some disadvantages in modern society. It can be harmful for our health, and keeping us far away from our friends or families, as well as making the person more lazy.
First of all, I think that the readiness of food can be harmful to our health. Because the fast foods are made from the materials with a bad quality, which is conserved and contained in one place for a long period of time. For example, the recent research shows us that the eighty-percent of people who are suffering from cancer are likely caused by the fast foods, which is made from these materials. Thus, it shows us that junk foods are negatively influenced to our body organs.
Secondly, I believe that the readiness of cooking is breaking the relationship between the family and friends. They are used to prepare their dinner while talking about themselves or even during their gossips. However, because of the fast foods they are no longer talk to each other freely and lively. For example, I used to talk with my mom while preparing our dinner. Nevertheless, we don't cook our lunch at home. Because our family has found that eating at restaurants is much more affordable than eating at home.
Finally, personally I think that the junk foods are leading modern human beings to the laziness. Because nowadays people tend to order a pizza or other fast foods while watching the TV or surfing the internet. Therefore, they might be adopt in this circumstances and they will prefer do to nothing.
As a result, the world will filled up with an obese humans who are leading their country to declining.
All in all, I think that easiness of cooking have more disadvantages than advantages. Therefore, it cause a harm to our health, affect our relationship with relatives, and making the humankind more lazy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to preparing'.
Suggestion: used to preparing
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'human'?
Suggestion: human
... the world will filled up with an obese humans who are leading their country to declin...
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...vantages than advantages. Therefore, it cause a harm to our health, affect our relati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i think, talking about, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77556818182 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59506588148 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514204545455 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5186849345 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.05 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11519332324 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370111440518 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052480279595 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566746897914 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579891760364 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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