Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some Doctors say that “try to spend time with your family make food for them and enjoy your life” it means that spend time with family members is grate joyful time for this reason I want say that I am agree with statement people can cocking easier now and it a big change and make everything easy for people live. So, I think it is really nice idea. For instance, they can save more time, people can use healthier foods and women or even men they can find jobs and make money to support their life in modern world or they support government or private sectors that create jobs, build company of processing foods like, fishes, vegetable and green house,. So, I love this statements.
First, nowadays people can cocking faster, better and easier it means they can save their time. So, it is nice idea to manage your time. However, I t is a short story about my life and how I save my time. I am working as Project manager at an UN organization. So, I am working near 10 hours per day and I am very busy and I do not have time for cocking. So, every day I buy some Hamburger and salad they are ready just I should put them in boiling water for 10 minutes and they are ready for eating. So, it is really facility for people and I believe this prepared foods are really complete. So, I love this idea and I think prepared foods has change and improved the way people live.
Next, people can use healthier foods. Some doctors believe that prepared foods have some advantages and disadvantage. But, I don’t like to talk about disadvantages. However, they say it is really good when people use from prepared foods first, these foods are really complete and have good qualities. Like, vitamins, calcium, Zink, and phosphor the most important elements that is effect on human brain. I love the statement that say prepared foods bring change and also improve in people life. All people that are busy love this statement.
Last but not least, if we you using form prepared foods, in fact, we help government and private sector to build some companies that produce prepared foods like, fishes on containers they are ready for cocking at least 20 minutes and vegetable can like bean and pea. So, I believe by supporting this ideas in fact, we support government and private sectors to create jobs opportunities for our people. I love this idea and strongly support that and all people should follow this rule. However, I think prepared food bring change and improved people live.
To summarize, I believe that prepared foods bring changes and improved people live in positive ways. In fact, these are my ideas about the topic title. However, people can save more time if they use prepared foods, they can spend more time with family if they use prepared foods and it is really joyful time together and no need to spend more time in kitchen. So, they can use form prepared foods. And the last is if we use from prepared foods. In fact, we support our food industries and help them to create jobs opportunities. However, I love this statement that say “Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live” I really like this idea and I strongly support this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, at least, for instance, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 13.8261648746 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2640.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 572.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61538461538 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33980360575 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.379370629371 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 832.5 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4381941281 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1612903226 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4516129032 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.67741935484 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 11.8709677419 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297218107782 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970979987442 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955250783006 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196766293382 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576261441173 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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