Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Food preparation and consumption plays an important role in our daily life. This is because with the increase in life style of people, we now have developed new interest in delicacies and this impacts our personal, social and economical life. with the advent in modern technology, food has become easier to prepare. Some people argue that this change has improved the way people live. Others disagree. In my view, yes this ease has certainly caused an improvement in peoples lives because of the following two reasons.
First, with the ease in food preparation, now people can save a considerable amount of time, which is a good merit in this modern society. Earlier trends used to be people waiting for hours, to enter and taste rare dishes offered by restaurants, but now with the help of various cooking websites people can easily avoid such time waste. For instance, a while back, I used to work in a paper selling company in New-York. Every time our company made a huge sale, we used to celebrate this, by having a group dinner in a nearby restaurant. The restaurant was a famous one so we were required to make early reservations and even with reservations, there used to be at least a hour long waiting time to get in our tables. Because of this, every time we had a reservation, we used to leave an hour early from the designated office hour. However, later on one of my colleague started to prepare the same dishes in our office kitchen by using the recipes in a cooking website. This occluded our need to waste office hours in the restaurant which was then used for more productive work. This experience, taught me that with increasing comfort in food preparations, daily life of people has changed considerably.
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Second, now people can consume more healthier varieties in their own kitchen. There in no need of ordering junk food from fast-food services, since healthy dishes can easily be prepared by looking in the internet. My own personal experience is a compelling evidence for this reason. During my university days, I shared an apartment with my friends. None of us knew how to cook properly, so the only option we had was to order fast-food like pizza, burgers,etc. However, after few months, one of my friend shared that if we buy some kitchen appliances, he could easily prepare dinner by gaining some knowledge from the net. All of us instantly agreed with him, as this not only provided us with a more salubrious alternative, but also was comparatively cheaper. This experience taught me that with the increasing easiness in preparing food, our health and life changed.
In sum, yes, the ease in food preparation has caused an important change in our living style by helping us to save our valuable time and promote our health. We should all, learn such cooking practices and bring about considerable changes in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, then, while, as to, at least, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2371.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82892057026 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67172362142 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519348268839 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 756.9 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2101735012 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7916666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4583333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29166666667 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215901117438 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716187810402 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746869565138 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144117136801 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815297851716 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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