Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Food has always been the one of the greatest wants of humankind. It has influenced almost every step that humankind has taken. The search for food is essence of life. Therefore if food is easier to get and prepare it is a real boon to humankind. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether today's food has become convenient to prepare or not. Agreement is yet to be reached; however, I am personally on the belief that due to prepared meals and fast food, the lifestyle has changed and people confront sedentary lifestyle, which is not healthy for people. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in today's hectic world, different kinds of diseases are on the rise and people suffer mostly from heart disease or even obesity and so forth. Scientifically speaking, in the past, people were informed from consequences of prepared meals because not only do fast food contain too much salt and sugar but also contain too much fat, which prevent people lead a healthy lifestyle. Delving further into the issue reveals that hardly ever can people improve their life with ready meals. In fact, not until people opt for nourishing meals can they enhance their healthy lifestyle. Actually, nowadays, fast foods are contained lower nutritional value and less mineral and vitamins. They have added flavor, colors and preservative to fast food, which are not helpful to our health. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country; show that vast majorities of people who not relied on ready and prepared meals had been much healthier and avoided unhealthy lifestyle. Indeed, not only did they take advantages of nutritive foods but also enjoyed home-cooked foods.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that members of family spend less time together and people have been lazier. Broadly speaking, cooking is kind of skill, which people can benefits from. In fact, not only can cooking be an art but also people can get satisfaction by cooking tasty meal. Indeed, it provides fertile ground for family to have fun and joy spending time and gathering with other members. To put it in other word, a precious moment has provided to address problems of all members of family and get hand to resolve their problems. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, ready meals are inexpensive and they take less time to be prepared. In fact, people will be provided with much more time to spend with each other. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, people confront various trials and tribulations when it comes to prepared meals. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that fast food can be the cause of different diseases such as obesity or heart disease and people will not be able to lead a healthy life. In addition, with home-cooked food people provide an opportunity to spent more time together and enjoy cooking. If people do not reverse such a trend, we will soon witness an unhealthy lifestyle among people with expansion of various diseases in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...The search for food is essence of life. Therefore if food is easier to get and prepare it...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225649350649 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.178571428571 0.158761421928 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105519480519 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0892857142857 0.046263068375 193% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0340909090909 0.0685040099705 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0957792207792 0.118717715034 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0487012987013 0.0351676179071 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67642657074 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324675324675 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00162337662338 0.00188951952338 86% => OK
Determiners: 0.0568181818182 0.0887237588012 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0178571428571 0.0209618222197 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0178571428571 0.0139019557991 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3347.0 2387.08602151 140% => OK
No of words: 557.0 408.028673835 137% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00897666068 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369838420108 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274685816876 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179533213645 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116696588869 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67642657074 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499102333932 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 60.6287149218 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8928571429 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2459597747 48.84282405 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.535714286 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8928571429 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.464285714286 0.644075263715 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 47.3614388305 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.22580645161 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248732430624 0.300154397459 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10433406907 0.103427244359 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0735589237054 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.420525141536 0.497263757937 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115364115545 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850695580092 0.114077575197 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578149815198 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.378122951563 0.336927656856 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0237816333475 0.067059652881 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182491240089 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901739588187 0.0618886996521 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 25.0 13.6433691756 183% => OK
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Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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