Nowadays, many movies or films are based on books. Some people prefer to read the original book before they watch the movie, other prefer to watch the movie before reading the book. Which one do you prefer?
Reading a book and watching a movie are two main activities that people do in their free time. So, these two actions are critical for people. In my opinion, it is better to watch a movie before reading the book. Here you can see my reasons.
First, watching the movie is more exciting. Nowadays, new technology has an important effect on filmmaking. It allows that filmmakers produce a ver exciting and interesting visual effects in their movie. However, when we read a book, we do not see any special scene to help us to recognize the situation and the story. This event reduces the effects of the book to be interesting for us. And most of the time we prefer to give up from reading.
Second, saving the time is another noticeable reason.Today's people must either study or work hard to built and manage their lives. So, they try to utilize from their time in a way that brings a lot of benefit for them. Also, they avoid from time wasting. In this situation people prefer to watch amoive at first. In fact, watching a movie just takes 2 hours, but reading a book takes more than two hours. And people can watch the movie and if they have free time then they can read a book.
On the contrary, some people think reading a book before watching a movie is better. Mainly, they can save their money. By emerging economic crisis around the world, people have a lot of trouble for managing their lives. So, they avoid from any unwanted money wasting. Buying a book just needs 10 dollars, but buying a movie needs more that 10 dollars. So, people’s tendency is toward reading a book at first. In fact, they read the book to recognize about the subject of the movie, and if it is interesting, they can go to watch a movie. However, I still declare that it is better to watch the movie first because they do not need to buy a book and they can save money. Also, they can ask from other people bout the subject instead of paying money for the book.
According to my passage, there are a lot of reasons to prove my claim that reading a book before watching the movie is a good idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, then, in fact, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41558441558 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29372857097 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9209002296 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3846153846 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8076923077 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65384615385 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428007469731 0.236089414692 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128192451679 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113494593392 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257849163352 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511193784303 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.