old friend is more important or new friend is important
Friendship is very adorable bond one can share. For me my friends are equivalent important as my family. May be because I have same friends from years of my childhood. So I believe that keeping older friend forever is important but that don't mean we stop making new friends. I will explain about this explicitly in below paragraphs.
To begin with as I stated I have friends that are of my childhood, this is because we both are living in same city from years. Anyway for me old friendship is very precious because I feel that we really invested time with them, we shared bond, we were with each other in every situation of life. The way we understand each other, the comfort that she will not judge me, she will help is definitely next level needed in friendship. We can totally rely on each other, our parents know a lot about our bond. So if someone is having such precious friendship definitly make them value importance of old friends. Friendships are not based on benefits and selfishness, However to explain the advantage of having old friends you can trust them blindly, they will always give you best advice and I am very sure they understand far well us then we do ourself. To explain this I will use my example, One of my childhood friend , she always helped me taking decision of life . This time when I was planning for USA, she really boosted me a lot to study, she helped me to find university. She is really bolster of my life.
To carry on further as I stated that old friends are very important for all trust and understanding parallel it is also important to interact with new people. Allow people to enter in your life and see if they are worth being with you, match your vibes, give them a shot. We never know what god has wrote for us. Old friends are precious but after a certain time when we shift for job and higher studies, we interact with new people and get involved with them, share thought so that is also important. Lets take this in way, when I will go to different city , I will need someone with whom I can spend time, travel to city, do shopping and many more such things. For me doing all such stuff all alone is really task. So in this way we make our new friends and when we match a vibe, we continue that bond from that time. This way we are allowing people to stay with us longer and we never know this bond will change from office conversation to deep emotional conversation and that lead to years of sharing bond.
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- old friend or new friend 70
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- 20 year care use 80
- old friend and new friend which one is more important 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...er friend forever is important but that dont mean we stop making new friends. I will...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... our parents know a lot about our bond. So if someone is having such precious friends...
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Line 3, column 768, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'you the best'.
Suggestion: you the best
...ust them blindly, they will always give you best advice and I am very sure they understa...
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Line 3, column 916, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e my example, One of my childhood friend , she always helped me taking decision of...
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Line 3, column 940, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to take' or 'take'.
Suggestion: to take; take
...childhood friend , she always helped me taking decision of life . This time when I was...
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Line 3, column 963, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...always helped me taking decision of life . This time when I was planning for USA, ...
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Line 3, column 1091, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bolstered'.
Suggestion: bolstered
...ed me to find university. She is really bolster of my life. To carry on further as I...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
...them a shot. We never know what god has wrote for us. Old friends are precious but af...
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Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...hare thought so that is also important. Lets take this in way, when I will go to dif...
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Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in way, when I will go to different city , I will need someone with whom I can spe...
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Line 5, column 712, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tasked'.
Suggestion: tasked
...oing all such stuff all alone is really task. So in this way we make our new friends...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, may, really, so, then, well, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39692982456 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34028915063 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478070175439 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9906829073 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1363636364 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221959341419 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793719025235 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107445221129 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199582552744 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765324878327 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.