One of the most challenge problems in modern society is to have the most up-to-date skills for workplace. For solving this, government decides to give all adults over the age of 25 a training course to learn new skills. Do you think it is an effective way for government to spend its money?
As an employee with holding seven years of experiences absolutely and clearly know that only they constantly learn the new skills can be to catch up with social steps. Meanwhile, thanks to they face that with the rapid development of society bring with intensive competition, causing increasing pressure to people. So that people need to learn new skills to adopt and to satisfy the social development, thereby they can guarantee their high efficient work productivity. Thus, from a person of viewpoint, it is definitely to know that is a great effective way for government to spend its money, which training course to over age of 25 adults to acquire new skills. The reasons are discussed below.
To begin with, it is a great way that government spends money on the age of 25 adults to train for new skills, which means that can promote beneficially the whole development of society. As we all know that facing the more and more intensive society, if people keep constantly learning new knowledge, which can earn the up-to-date skills for their job to work. Thereby, it can way enhance national economic development from dissenting career. Such as, if people train technological course through support of government policy, and then people will get the up-to-date high-Technology and information-Technology, of which satisfy one of the most challenge problems in modern society. Thus, no matter the purpose of the business, it is a great policy that young people get the training course for new skills, which can enhance beneficially and surly development of society.
Additionally, training course to the over age of 25 adults to obtain new skills that can expand people’s horizon to acquire higher efficient competition in the international status. Taking Disneyland for an instance, theme park can bring a lot of economic benefit on tourism industry. As we all know that technological change make up an important factor to attract tourisms go to new place to play in. Like equipment of Pirates of the Caribbean which project use swivel sliding pathway with a boat to take tourisms to explore, and adopts a huge screen with animation film, and sophisticated decorations, and other top of technologies. Thanks to these all of the top new of technologies attract around the world of tourisms to visit SH. Meanwhile, workers acquire beneficial technology through the support of government policy. Obviously, if other industries can train course to acquire new skills, we cannot image that how will they bring a mass of economic effectives?
Finally, it’s not deniable that working without the up-to-date skill that can bring one or even more downsides. For instance, some company might keep the outdate ways to work, so that cannot follow the step of development of society progress. However, in light of the above-mentioned possibility, a personal suggest that companies or other careers should follow the government policy for over the 25 of age adults to train course to obtain new skills, which they can satisfy the requires of society progress. Thereby, people can acquire a lot of benefits from the new skills, and can earn more money to enhance people’s living standards. That is the so-called that multi-skills are not pressure, which not only for individual also for whole the country. Thus, this so a great policy why we do not to train?
There’s nothing wrong with spending some money on the over of 25 age adults to get new skills. For a mass of benefits and best living quality, our country will be a great beneficiary if all of you carry out this government policy for future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 98.0 52.1666666667 188% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3015.0 1977.66487455 152% => OK
No of words: 596.0 407.700716846 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05872483221 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94096258147 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90463477567 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436241610738 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 918.0 618.680645161 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5568177634 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.6 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.84 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338519581131 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988257780803 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647311065464 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211896707692 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320043061258 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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