the opinions of celebrities are more important to younger people than they are to older people?
Recently, entertainers and celebrities have had great impact on societies. Some people believe that young people are more influenced by celebrities' opinions; however, there is a substantial body of evidence claims that older people are more affected by entertainers' thinking. From a personal perspective, the former point of view carries more weight, given that teenagers are more active on social media, young and naive. Below I will strive to explain my supporting point in more detail.
The first and foremost point, younger people who access the internet have social media accounts; furthermore, they follow celebrities' accounts either on Facebook, Twitter or Instagram. A vivid example that can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is, during the last Egyptian presidential election, the famous Singer Amr Diad revealed his political point of view that, he will vote to Abdel- Fatah El-Sisi. Thus, may of his teenagers fans got affected by his opinion and voted to the same candidate. however, older people did not affect because they were not active on social media accounts. Consequently, younger people care about celebrities' opinions more than older people.
Next, coupled with social media, youth is another reason why young people follow famous people. For instance, the Liverpool footballer Mohamed Salah is ana icon and role model for many teenagers, given that he embodies the ideals for a young person who has achieved his dreams. Moreover, youth usually are interested in people who fall in their own ages. Therefore, young people are more influenced by celebrities.
Although the previous reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only reasons available. There is another subtle point must be born in mind. older people believe that they are wise enough; hence, they just trust their own ideas. On the other hand, young people are naive to the reality of the world, they are more susceptible to the influence of others. A survey conducted by The Psychological National Association in California found older people do not affect by celebrities' thoughts in the economical and political topics. Provided that older people do not trust entertainers, they will not be influenced by their opinions. As a result, famous people's points of view are not important to older people.
Taking everything into consideration; without a doubt, the opinions of celebrities are more important to younger people than they are to older people. It is suggested to guide teenagers to be influenced by just the positive side of celebrities' life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22248803828 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70452614431 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521531100478 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7171337512 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2272727273 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.539035219173 0.236089414692 228% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170952610129 0.076458572812 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1633547904 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325362857702 0.150856017488 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11305157036 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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