In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age.
Children are the future of societies in the today's world. Some people are inclined toward the idea that children should learn how to spend their money at young age. However, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that it is not necessary for children to learn to manage their own money when they are at a young stage of their life. In my perspective, it is vital for adults to try manage their money at young age, in order to become financially responsible. In the following paragrapht, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason worth mentioning is that childrend experience how to be responsible in their future life. Nowadays, many people have a hectic life and financial problems since they spend most of their time on a full-time career. Therefore, they have to try hard for gaining income for their lives. Since children are living in their own world, it is crucial to teach them the importance of being responsible. For example, every parents can give their children chores to do like cleaning room and after that if they did their chore pay them money. Hence, children can understand that earning money is a difficult task for everyone and learn the importance of money.
A further more subtle point is that children will learn how to spend their money when they grow ups which is extremly important for them. Students who come to dormitory, are alone and away from their parent. They have to manage their money that their parent gave to the end of the mouth. It will be a good practice for them how to save and expend their money which in the future they become more responsible. Also, based on their amount of money, they have to make a wise plan for their cost. For instance, a person who has not a lot of money should thinks about his purchases. Therefore, he will learn how to divide his money for his purchasing.
- In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. 60
- TPO 3 3
- TPO 12 - It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Children are the future of societies in ...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...erson who has not a lot of money should thinks about his purchases. Therefore, he will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68996960486 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40780903906 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495440729483 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7972762143 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7222222222 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400753198417 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13786912233 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110608174488 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316921832265 0.150856017488 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154558360687 0.0645574589148 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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