Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generation. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific answers or examples to support your answer.
No one can deny the fact that due to the advancement of technology, life today has become so comforting and relaxing. In the given scenario, whether the present way of our living has influenced our upcoming generation in a good or bad way has triggered heated debate. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly our current activity will affect the forth coming generation. I feel this way for several reason which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, population is growing at an alarming rate. Rapid growth of people means the more usage of available resources. Nowadays, we human have become so lazy that we need a very easy life. To cite an example, If everybody start to use car for their comfort then there will be the scarcity of fuel in near future. Similarly, the excessive use of car results in air pollution as well . Eventually this will lead to pollution and climate change and repercussions should be bear by our future generation. Therefore, this how the upcoming generation are going to be affected by our current deeds.
Next, In this digital modern world, we can obtain anything and everything just in one click away. To be more precise, we don’t have to go out for our necessities be it food, clothes, electronic gadget and so on. As a result, this is making us a very self centered person. In other word, we don’t value our family and don’t spend much time with them which consequently hampers the upcoming era as they learn the same thing from us. For instance, I mostly spend my time doing work or seeing movie on my laptop and my little sister she also watches cartoons on desktop. What I mean to say is , she or I could spend our time with family rather than indulging in unnecessary stuff. Thus, this clearly shows, future generation immites things from us and we should be mindful of our activity.
All things considered, the current way of our living is not welcoming for our upcoming generation. If we continue to live a life as we are currently living then the outcome of this will be deleterious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, i mean, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71625344353 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64551157044 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0889658051 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.6 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177172567484 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551915801176 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042576385453 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125967411082 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369577263152 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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