Parents should take important decision for their older teenage children. Do you agree or disagree?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that one of the heavy burdens on the shoulder of parents is raising children who are well-adjusted in the societies, away from all prevailing anomalies. To achieve this aim, they motivate their children to experience the trials and tribulations of real life. Stemming from this fact, a relevant question that is a moot point is whether people should make decisions for their children. Due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general agreement on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that if children do not make decisions by themselves, they will run into a huge problem and will not grow maturely. The following reasons will aptly substantiate my personal perspective.
To commence with, there is no doubt that parents make an effort or bend over backward in order to help their children to reach a long-lasting success. But this achievement by children will be more stable in their personal lives. Generally phrased, parents should allow children to experience life for themselves and face difficulties exclusively. In this way, children or even youth will learn how to behave and how to make a sound decision when running into a serious problem. For instance, consider children who his/her parent make significant decisions for him/her, afterward, he/she will use to his/her parents' decisions making and rely on their opinion. So, in this case, he/she will not learn how to live in future and handle problems solely. To elucidate more on this issue, parents should patronize their children to grow maturely and become experienced in the long run.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that children should learn how to take the responsibility of their acts and live independently. To put in another word, parents should provide an opportunity for their children to be responsible for their works. Indeed, there is a possibility that children do something wrong so, they should learn how to react against their faults. Going into the depth, independent life will help children to be responsible for every works they done and parents should galvanize them to experience life autonomously.
However, on the other hand, children are not enough mature to make right decisions and might run into huge problems in their life. In fact, their parents should make an effort to learn them how not to make an idiot decision. As a matter of fact, not until parents support their children can they make a progress day in day out.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that one of the incumbents upon parents is to patronize their children wisely but let them experience life for themselves. In fact, children should learn how to make a sound decision when they confront trials and tribulations. Also, parents should allow their children to experience independent life and take the responsibility for their acts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, in fact, no doubt, as a matter of fact, by and large, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07468879668 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78977378313 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439834024896 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.9 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6441546338 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.347826087 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9565217391 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34022037141 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126973581022 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777210419669 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240090565704 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590954804057 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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