parents should teach their kids to manage their own money at young age?
The main role of the parents is to teach, guide, and to keep their children safe. In my opinion, I agree that in order to become a finacially resposible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age. Given that habits formed at young age are stable, having more time to practice, and confidence in finacially independence.
Firstly, learning anything at young age can form stable habits. A new research found that the most important age for childern is the kindergargen age, child’s brain is like a sponge can soak up huge amount of information, and this information can last for a lifetime. Consequently, provided that parents learn their childern to mange their budget at young age, they will build a foundation for their future life.
Next, coupled with stable habits, much more time for practicing is another reason to learn children to mange their own money at young age. Teaching childern about money will force them to do mistakes now rather than later. To that end, by practicing children can learn from their mistakes and turn them into valuable life lessons. These lessons not only will teach them to be more savvy with their money, but also improve their decision-making ability.
Finally, adults who have learned to mange their own money at young age, have a confidence in finacially independence. For example, a famous company founder anounced that the most important reason of his finacially success was his parents. When he was a child, he received money for doing household tasks such as cleaning. They teach him how to take responsibility, and be independent. Therefore, learning childern to mange their own money is a great way to foster a responsible attitude in them.
Taking everything into a consideration, without doubt learning childern to manage their own money at young age helps them to be finacially responsible adults. It is suggested to educate families about the benefits of teaching their kids about money .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05828220859 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75835553965 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0148950347 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.530140161965 0.236089414692 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18218524033 0.076458572812 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120941650338 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339013906664 0.150856017488 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845148289177 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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