People are easier to get educated today than in the past.
People often hold different perspective on whether people are easier to get educated today than in the past. Based on my personal experience and observation of life, I strongly agree that people are easier to get educated today than in the past.
First of all, people need money to get educated, and today people are more affordable to get educated. In the past, only wealthy people could get educated because tuition fee was expensive. Actually, most people did not have enough money to pay the tuition fee. However, nowadays wage level of people is even higher than before. As a result, almost everyone can get educated today. Take my country, Taiwan, as an example, over 97 percent of adults have gotten educated after 1990s.
Secondly, people should have time to get educated, and today people have more time to get educated. For instance, most people were busy in earning money in the past, even children had to go to work. Yet, nowadays children do not have to go to work anymore. As a result, children can spend so much time getting educated. They generally go to kindergarten since they are just 4 or 5 years old. Then, they will go to elementary schools, junior high school and senior high school. In fact, they usually can spend more than ten years on getting educated.
Last but not least, people put emphasis on convenience to get educated, and today getting educated is more convenient than in the past. For instance, there were not so many schools in the past. Hence, people usually had to go far away from home to get educated. Take my mother for example, she told me that there was no elementary school near her home. Thus she had to walk about 6 kilometers to go to her school. However, nowadays the number of schools is more than before. As a result, most people can go to the school just close to their houses if they want. They do not need to go far away to get educated.
In conclusion, people are easier to get educated today than in the past. That is to say, since nowadays people have more money and time, and getting educated is more convenient now. It is easier for people to get educated today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62105263158 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33674134444 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426315789474 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2125694777 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.5384615385 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.570819451823 0.236089414692 242% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210202894376 0.076458572812 275% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.235342846869 0.0737576698707 319% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.467837367543 0.150856017488 310% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.22159309996 0.0645574589148 343% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.16 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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