People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different.
Universally satisfaction is a temporary thing for human beings. someone can not stay satisfied with something for always. it is natural that people are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. In my opinion, satisfaction is a state of mind that does not last forever it comes for a moment.
To begin with, the main reason for momentary satisfaction is a person is curious about what will happen if I get something he just thinks the positive outcome of that thing he imagines the whole scenario about what will he do after achieving it which leads to more curiosity and curiosity is first emotion human being learned after birth so after actually achieving something he finally satisfies all his imagination practically but now he can also get to know about negative points of that thing so after curiosity ends it is all just experience not a satisfaction anymore. one knows about the demerits of something after using it so satisfaction is not gonna last long.
Secondly, not satisfying with one thing is the reason for new inventions. being unique is a mindset of some people so they can't stay
satisfied. my personal experience is a great example of this, when I was a child at age of 10 my parent started to buy me clothes but I wasn't satisfied because some of my friends bought the same kind of outfits so I wanted to be unique in my style so I wanted to buy different outfits than all of my friends. Thus uniqueness is also temporary so the person is not gonna stay satisfied anyway.
To conclude, Humans are not satisfied with what they have. I strongly believe that it is a natural phenomenon, this is because satisfaction is the result of curiosity and it ends with achieving that thing and uniqueness is a temporary thing to carry so the satisfaction of being unique is momentary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75851393189 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75763294977 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46439628483 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.545499192 48.9658058833 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.083333333 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328017110422 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162882962484 0.076458572812 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.231214244826 0.0737576698707 313% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201826288727 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153262774906 0.0645574589148 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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