People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People attend university for a lot of different reasons. I believe the most common reasons are that they want to gain experience new things, to prepare for a career, and increase their knowledge. I can illustrate these kinds of views in the following paragraphs.
Career preparation is probably the first reason for individuals attend college. Because there is a lot of competition between the jobs market finding a decent job these days is a big challenge for most people. And companies will hire employees with a good resume. So, students should promote their resume with study hard and got a better GPA.
Also, it is obvious that people go to universities to gain new experiences. For many students, it is their first time that they far away from home. They will meet new people from different cultures and races. Moreover, they should do tasks by themselves without having a family nearby. As a result, they would have gained different new things that happened to them. They should take responsibility for themselves.
Increased knowledge is another reason for individuals that attend university. As students select what they want to study, they can enhance their knowledge about their characters by interacting with their classmates and their professor. So, they can aware of their personal weakness to promote them. Furthermore, they can attend other classes such as music along with their courses. Also, for most students, it can be the last opportunity to attend.
In conclusion, individuals attend college or university for different reasons that help them to enhance the quality of their lives in various ways. People will find a decent job and have increased their knowledge. Moreover, having new experiences would help individuals living independently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27112676056 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78950364566 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7470109898 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2857142857 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5238095238 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28210489912 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100987176812 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106439289593 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185567674117 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798258298045 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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