People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, and increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
While people have different goals and purposes for attending university or college, it is impossible to determine the sheer reasons for attending university. However, I am of the opinion that people pursue their tertiary education for two main reasons, which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, People mostly attend university because it helps them with their future career. As we all know, nowadays, finding a high-paid job without a tertiary credential is almost impossible. Especially in our country, one searching for a job must have a higher education diploma. My personal experience is a compelling example of this: five years ago, when I was graduated from high school, I decided to stop my education journey and work as a waiter in a locale restaurant. After spending three months working there with as low income as I could not afford my basic needs, I realised the significance of education for a high-paid job. Therefore, I enrolled in a locale university and resumed my higher education. Hence now, I am a professional doctor with a satisfying salary. Had not I gone to the university, I might still have had a low revenue.
Second and last, Higher education has a profound impact on cultivating and shaping our personality. When attending universities, we meet new people, and make new friends; we meet a new beginning, new adventures, new challenges. Which it all adds up to our experiences and makes us more mature and ripe. For instance, three years ago, when I was a school student, I was timid and introverted. I did not like any kind of communication with others, but when I enrollel at a university, it pursued me to participate in discussions with my class fellows and present presentations. Hence, these four years of active participation in campus and class activities have changed my personality, and now I have changed to a very active and friendly per person
To put them all in a nutshell, I believe that people pursue their higher education because it not only helps them with their future career but also it makes them a fruitful person in their community
- People attend college or university for many different reasons for example new experiences career preparation and increased knowledge Why do you think people attend college or university Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- People attend college or university for many reasons Why do you think people attend universities Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea 68
- People attend university for many reasons What do you think why people attend universities Use specific reasons and example to support your idea 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 726, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ersity and resumed my higher education. Hence now, I am a professional doctor with a ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96629213483 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00298635185 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547752808989 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1621692223 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183060999664 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600361304932 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830674631722 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124599164816 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932595940902 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.