College or university is considered to be a major source of knowledge and experience, and thus people going to there should be seeking academic or professional development. But also many people, naturally, need a favorable atmosphere to socialize. These and other points will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
First of all they are considered places for gaining knowledge and experience. This can be proved by the experience of millions of people. As for me, my university provides me with rigorous knowledge, which could be effectively used in my future career as an economist. My own experience provides me the bases of speaking favorably for the university not only as a source of knowledge, but also a place offering a plausible atmosphere for making a research. This drives to the conclusion that colleges are places that
Secondly, as mentioned above, many people feel comfortable in social environment, and colleges along with universities are great places for such atmosphere. That people convene for a special aim (e.g. learning, professional development, etc.), stands behind the success of these places as a comfortable platform for social interaction. It is not all about the interaction itself, but the professional development, experience and familiar topics on the subjects learnt that make this success. When I look into my own experience, I see that it is the way as described. When I have a problem of not understanding a particular topic, I can always rely on my friends, who are eager to explain it to me.
There is another reason for coming to college or university, noticed by me. There are people, who come to a certain university or to a particular faculty , because it is thought as prestigious. I have seen such classmate of mine, who wanted to become a psychologist, but, at his own peril, he came to the faculty of economics, which, I think, will have its effects in his future career.
To conclude, I would like to say that there are various reasons why people go to a college or university, but one thing is apparent, it is their own choice, and therefore they probably find it a right decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as for, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97206703911 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06896544359 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527932960894 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0268668696 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240462394698 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738933975455 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676905311322 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12887074202 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133818268724 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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