Nowadays, many people attend college or university for several reasons, for career preparation, increase knowledge and new experiences. I think that one of the foremost important reason to people attend a college or university is to get a good job and achieve financial security in the future.
First of all, a university degree is required in order to be hired even the most basics jobs. If some individual does not have a university or college degree likely he won’t be hired in a good job. Individuals in possession merely a high school diploma are employed solely in very low paying and low skilled fields. At the college or university, people can improve their skills and hence find a good opportunity.
Secondly, colleges and universities provide several opportunities for networking which help young people find high paying jobs following their graduation. In addition, going to university is an extremely good way to meet new people and make long-lasting relationships. So, going to college can be a way to facilitate entry into the job market through those people.
Thirdly, most people not only want to prepare themselves for a career but also might expand their knowledge. For example, one of my friends decided to continue his education in Master’s degree merely owing to the fact that he wanted to expand his knowledge
In conclusion, I think that the people attend college and universities are doing the right thing because they are want to be prepared for their career, so they are thinking about improving their knowledge and in pursuit of financial security in the future, and education will be critical to achieving its goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12867647059 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87846517142 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.669171019 48.9658058833 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 5.45110844103 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390850586317 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154570074733 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143631289877 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235642875701 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164643674524 0.0645574589148 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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