People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
Some people attend college or university for various purposes. They consider that having a degree have a lot of benefits for one’s life such as having a diploma, acquire a discipline quality and get a well-paid job. I think that after graduation students have a plethora of opportunities to be successful.
First of all, after graduation students will have a diploma that proves their degree or qualification. It is exactly that after graduation Stanford university our family and relatives will proud of us. For example, my friend entered to MIT university 5 years ago and after finishing it, his reputation between us increased rapidly. That’s why people wish to get a diploma that the others will respect them.
Secondly, this gives chance to do researches for self-improving. If someone enter to university, he is present on lectures and seminars. It helps for doing his research not only for getting a higher score, but also give opportunity to demonstrate their work to worldwide. In my opinion, in this way he can contribute to his university as well. For instance, once one of my best friend completed his research and subsequently, he won a money award for his work. After that, he contributed this to university for implementing the other projects.
Thirdly, before graduation most large corporations offer a job for excellent students high-salary jobs. Students can be hired to this company after finishing the college or university. As an example, my uncle finished his degree in the University of Oxford. He had a prospective job that can afford himself a car after a half year. I think that well-paid jobs would be offered for people who finished college or university.
To sum up, attending to college or university has many advantages such as have a proud of family or relatives, work on themselves and have a high-income job. I believe that after graduating university we are able to open new doors in a life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enters'.
Suggestion: enters
...searches for self-improving. If someone enter to university, he is present on lecture...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02786377709 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02667327036 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551083591331 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2670744861 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221525709277 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783619710837 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887488527423 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133830644906 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327460971634 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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